BE WITH FLOWERS,
WILL TEACH YOU TO BE FULL OF HUE.
SPEAK TO THE BIRDS,
WILL TEACH YOU TO HUM.
CONVERSATION WITH THE EARTH,
WILL TEACH YOU INEFFABLE PATIENCE.
COMMUNICATE WITH THE FIRE,
WILL TEACH YOU TO BE ADAMANT.
SPEND TIME WITH WATER,
WILL TEACH YOU TO BE COOL.
LOVE ME FOREVER,
WILL TEACH YOU ,HOW TO LEAD YOUR REMNANT LIFE.;)
better sell this last stanza to 'icici retirement solutions'... :D
ReplyDeleteWonderful use of Metaphors,this poem carries a nice message.. comparing life wid nature... Truly Awesome :)Keep the creativity flowing !!
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